Deliverable Review Form

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General comments

Main main comments are -I think you are underselling the achievements of SA1. You present them as facts and figures. I suggest to put a positive spin on these, added-value, impact, what is different now compared to three years ago

-The implementation results are thorough. I would add, as the point above, value analysis, impact evaluation

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.