Deliverable Review Form
Identification of the deliverable or milestone |
Project: EMI |
Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.4.4 |
Title: DJRA1.4.4 - Infrastructure Area Work Plan and Status Report |
Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x |
Author(s): L. Field |
Due date: 08/04 |
Identification of the reviewer |
Name: S. Memon |
Affiliation: JUELICH |
EMI Activity/External project or Institute: NA3 |
Review date |
04/08/2013 |
Author(s) revision date |
mm/dd/yyyy |
Reviewer acceptance date |
mm/dd/yyyy |
Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link
General comments
- The deliverable clearly highlights the objectives in the third year of EMI, with illustrating the list of objectives aimed at the EMI-3 release.
- To my observation the deliverable is ready unless all my comments are addressed.
Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)
- I think DJRA144 being a final output of the infrastructure area, can be considered as an opportunity to describe any future dimensions of the new products. It could be,
for instance, foreseen EMIR production deployments, standardization of the EMI
CaR and
StaR formats, etc.
Detailed comments on the content
Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described
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Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.
Topic revision: r2 - 2013-04-08
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