Deliverable Review Form

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

• major revision necessary, especially in the planning activities with time-lines, planning deadlines, project members needed for which activities, etc.
• however, I acknowledge the fact that NA2 might have a low budget to be effective

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

• NA2 and NA3 need to work more actively together, could someone from NA2 be a liasion to NA3 and join our telcons?

Detailed comments on the content

• see attached document with 'track changes'
• 2011-12-01_EMI_DNA2.3.2_v0.1_MRi.docx: DNA2.3.2 (version 0.1) - Review by NA3 - major revision necessary

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.