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N°	Page	Section	Observations and Replies	Is Addressed?
1	5	1.3 References	R1: long url, http://cdsweb.cern.ch/record/1277533 is enough. -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011
2	8	2	Much work have been done -> Much work has been done and and -> and -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011
3	9	3.1	EMI-0 -> EMI 0 emi -> EMI integration the mock RPM packaging tool -> integration of the mock ... -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011
4	10	3.3.2	There are many ETICS plugins also for C/C++. There is no need to say that they exist mainly for Java. -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011
5	11	3.3.4	The definition of regression test is more general than the one given here. I would add "in this context" towards the beginning of the phrase. -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011
6	11	3.3.6	Significant effort have been put -> Significant effort has been put Detailed figures on how certification reports availability and completeness -> Detailed figures on certification reports availability and completeness -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011
7	13	4	May, 12th 2011 -> May 12th, 2011 -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011
8	15	Table 4	Some components have the version, some don't. -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011 The names are the ones found in the release tracker, where some have the version and some don't. -- AndreaCeccanti - 04-Jun-2011
9	18	4.2.3	only in one third the verified components -> only in one third of the verified components -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011
10	19	4.2.4	is recommended -> it is recommended -- FrancescoGiacomini - 03-Jun-2011

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FloridaEstrella - 20-Apr-2011