Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D6.1.1
Title: DNA3.1.1 Collaborations, Exploitation and Sustainability Plan Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): Peter Stefan Due date: 30/04/2012

Identification of the reviewer
Name: Florida Estrella Affiliation: CERN EMI Activity/External project or Institute: NA1

Review date mm/dd/yyyy
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

24/05 Florida

My main concerns are:

1. inadequate response to the outstanding actions from M12

2. clarity of the characteristics/boundary between Tech/Channel/Infra

3. all ongoing collaborations should have current status, in addition to workplan

4. exploitation of EMI in Prace/other HPC/* must be supported with concrete unambiguous links to EMI-developed sw

Side note: Should the SS position paper be added as annex to this del?

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
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Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FloridaEstrella - 04-May-2012

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