SA1 Deliverable Review Form
Identification of the deliverable or milestone |
Project: EMI |
Deliverable or milestone identifier: D4.2.2 |
Title: DSA2.2.2 - QA Tools Documentation |
Doc. identifier: EMI-DSA2.2.2-QA_Tools_Documentation-v1.doc |
Author(s): L. Dini |
Due date: 23/03/11 |
Identification of the reviewer |
Name: F. Giacomini |
Affiliation: INFN |
EMI Activity/External project or Institute: SA1 |
Review date |
17/03/11 |
Author(s) revision date |
25/03/2011 |
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General comments
The document is well written and is acceptable as it is. The only improvement I recommend is to expand the References section, which currently contains just one entry. In particular it would be useful to have references to the many tools and technologies mentioned in the document.
Lorenzo Dini 27-04-2011: 47 references have been added to the most relevant technologies.
Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)
Detailed comments on the content
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Topic revision: r3 - 2011-04-28
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